This is a really cool Mystery! I love how out-there it is; anything that brings more aliens and MIBs to Degoya County is a win in my book. You've got a real knack for killer Paint the Scene prompts, and the Special Rule for watching a Tape in the Surveillance Van is spectacular.
A few small errors I spotted:
The Opportunity for "How do we destroy the Hatchling?" mentions Mama, where I think it should mention the Godmother instead
The headings for Locations, 24 Rodenbecker St, Side Characters, Megan Mitchell, the Deputy Sheriff, the Rewards, and the Clues are all stuck at the bottoms of pages preceding their actual sections
Thank you for your support! And thank you for pointing out the errors. This mystery was made before I got Affinity, so I learned the hard way that exporting a Google Doc into a PDF isn't always smooth.
I went ahead and revised the document, formatted it in Affinity, and cleaned it up a bit. No major changes, but it makes for a smoother read.
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This is a really cool Mystery! I love how out-there it is; anything that brings more aliens and MIBs to Degoya County is a win in my book. You've got a real knack for killer Paint the Scene prompts, and the Special Rule for watching a Tape in the Surveillance Van is spectacular.
A few small errors I spotted:
Thank you for your support! And thank you for pointing out the errors. This mystery was made before I got Affinity, so I learned the hard way that exporting a Google Doc into a PDF isn't always smooth.
I went ahead and revised the document, formatted it in Affinity, and cleaned it up a bit. No major changes, but it makes for a smoother read.
Again, grateful for your support!
Looks nice and clean, great work!